tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3165463332200678857.post5015787006596412039..comments2024-03-08T07:30:01.721-06:00Comments on Miles to go: autumn haikuThe Moon in Autumnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00746463775107732805noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3165463332200678857.post-20683453675082704972009-11-15T22:21:41.668-06:002009-11-15T22:21:41.668-06:00:):)The Moon in Autumnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00746463775107732805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3165463332200678857.post-57019687631856796942009-11-15T21:24:54.844-06:002009-11-15T21:24:54.844-06:00I was in a snarky mood that night...
incidentally...I was in a snarky mood that night...<br /><br />incidentally, though, the whole post taken as a poem does have something satisfying about itLiz Comptonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14794343826659644118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3165463332200678857.post-25366191935347109262009-11-15T20:24:37.882-06:002009-11-15T20:24:37.882-06:00:) I actually just meant the top bit to be the po...:) I actually just meant the top bit to be the poem, but you're right about it as a whole . . . Hmmmm.The Moon in Autumnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00746463775107732805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3165463332200678857.post-56183988870233942962009-11-13T21:56:05.807-06:002009-11-13T21:56:05.807-06:00I've never seen a haiku with one stanza of thr...I've never seen a haiku with one stanza of three lines and two stanzas with one line each... I really like the conceptual development in the second stanza, and the resolution in the third.Liz Comptonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14794343826659644118noreply@blogger.com